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Showing posts with label 2018 writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2018 writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 5 December 2018

Christmas Poetry

Christmas Poetry

Red bursts of colour
Everywhere they appear
The trees telling all
Christmas time is here!

The beaches are bursting
“Sunscreen! I need more!”
Barbecue’s fired up
Try to find space on the shore

Christmas in New Zealand
Not a snowflake in sight
lTime for family and relaxing
On a gorgeous Christmas night.




You can write as many stanzas as you would like. However, in each stanza you must
have the following format:

Lines 1 and 3 can be anything
Lines 2 and 4 must rhyme

Christmas is here no one cares
they Wish that Next year no one will be there like a Bear



Tomorrow is  Christmas
it is the day and they
like to play and I go to
Mission Bay they Say
That it is the best day

your Life

Tuesday, 20 November 2018

Animation Voice Over

so here is my task for this week

PLAN-Just write some keywords to help when you write your sentences
Introduce your animation (this doesn’t need to be long):
What are we learning about this term Te wa toi  (Inquiry
topic + animation task)
What materials may have been used once upon a time to create cave art? Sharp Rock and a spear
Your narrative:
Characters?Ragnarok and valeli
Setting in the  Darkest cave
Problem They couldn't find a way out because it was too
dark
Solution? They found a light and there was a man standing
there he said what is the
# password they said I don't know he says you may go
Summary/ Conclusion - Thank your audience and ask
for a comment to be left
on your blog.Thank you for commenting on my blog I
hope you do it again

Hi my name is siakupega this is Animation for Term 4
There are people that are trying to
find some food they went  into a Cave and they found
a buffalo they tried To throw
there spear then they got it and then they took it
back to their Village and the village
Said hurry And the next day they got hungry they
went back to the cave and there was some More
buffalos with a baby and then   they throw there
spear And then they took their mother Buffalo and
the baby buffalo to the village and then that was the
the end of my Animation for Term 4 I hope you enjoy .

Thursday, 15 November 2018

Keyhole Narrative

Keyhole Narrative
so here is the task for this week

WALT use a writing plan to help organise our ideas Hawaii
Volcano
A secret tunnel leading to Hawaii that no one knows?What some candy floss
of clouds that no one knows that could happen And on the stone was a big  house
that was very rusty With a very yellow colourful sunset
With a big mountain next to the volcano
Green grass but it was differ then all the other grasses in the world


Using the picture above, write a narrative. Be sure to use the Planning Slides and post
them to your blog before you begin writing.


Start writing here:  


A long , long , day ago there  was a man call Ragnarok in a Dusty  desert he Could
fly. As soon as something rumbed he  Thought  it was a earthquake but it  was not
a earthquake it was a volcano  coming up. From the desert and it made some grass
and Mountains and  the land came Green and there were like candy floss cloud.
And then Ragnarok called that his new home is going to be called Hawaii  in a Few
days Something came out of the Volcano . And it was like a rock but this one was
different a house was on it that was very rusty and  he went up to see what it was.
and he went inside but someone Kicked him out and that was the end of the of my
story .

Friday, 2 November 2018

That Really Stinks


  1. WALT identify the characters, setting and problem in a narrative story.
    WALT write an engaging solution to the problem in a narrative story.
    1. Watch the story starter for the story, That Really Stinks.


    1. Plan for your writing: in the Bathroom and the doors and the
    2. monsters cave Sam and his sister


    Characters:Sam and his sister
    Setting:He was playing with the sister's phone and then the
    Problem: The monster took her sister's phone.


    1. Write the ending for the story. He touches the phone and then
    2. it Farted and then he drops the phone and then Sam went and
    3.  goes and get it and run away and take her phone back to his sister.


    1. Fast finisher He was playing with his sister phone and he  
    2. keep on pushing it and then it farted again and then the
    3. monster came out of the Toilet then he was Holding it and
    4. then when the monsters other hand  was tickling him and

    5. then he let go of the phone and then he had to go in the toilet and
    6. flush him down to go and get it.

    • Write the beginning of the story to go with the movie.
  2. monster came and took it and he said oh I'm in big trouble from my
  3. sister.

Wednesday, 24 October 2018

Recount your earliest memory

Your Task: Recount your earliest memory.


Planning:Last Thursday me and my cousin went for Holiday to 7 places.and that was the Surprised day of my Life.


Writing;First we went to Mt Wellington  Volcano.Then we went to one tree.
Hill And I saw A lot of sheep  then we went to the Museum and I saw a Lots of
Dinosaur bones and I. Went to the volcano. In the Museum and we
went into the house I think and then there was a earthquake it Was Shakin. Then We
went to SPCA I saw same cat thats looks like my cat And I saw Rabbit And. puppies and dogs. We
went to Kelly tarltons I saw lots of fish and some little sharks and I thought it was going to eat me
And i saw a really big. Turtle with a baby next to it was the Biggest Volcano I ever seen and it was call Rangitoto. And that a Amazing day of Life.

Friday, 14 September 2018

Designing a sport: Planning and writing doc




Today for writing  we had to make up a own sports I made my own sports it was tennis we have to Hit the ball Pasta the person that is info on the other side and if we do it  15 points and if you get another 15 points you win the game when It is half-time and then we were and then they get a break when the come back on they have to go back to the tennis and get their point 30 and team 2 win the game.