Writing Doc: Keyhole Narrative

Once upon a time there was a boy call Rae jae he went out is house and then a  zombie came out of nowhere and the zombie Bit him on his neck and Rae jae run back in his house. And then the zombie was sits on the next to his house dench and he went to the stone wall. And then he look at the lovey sunset and then look at the volcano with lava falling down it the zombie went to it and then. He Suddenly he tripped into the lava in the volcano and that was the end of the zombie.



today me and my Buddy Bradley Needed to make my writing since and Full stops and capital letters and he He fixed some of my writing.