Your Task: Recount your earliest memory.
Planning:Last Thursday me and my cousin went for Holiday to 7 places.and that was the Surprised day of my Life.
Writing;First we went to Mt Wellington Volcano.Then we went to one tree.
Hill And I saw A lot of sheep then we went to the Museum and I saw a Lots of
Dinosaur bones and I. Went to the volcano. In the Museum and we
went into the house I think and then there was a earthquake it Was Shakin. Then We
went to SPCA I saw same cat thats looks like my cat And I saw Rabbit And. puppies and dogs. We
went to Kelly tarltons I saw lots of fish and some little sharks and I thought it was going to eat me
And i saw a really big. Turtle with a baby next to it was the Biggest Volcano I ever seen and it was call Rangitoto. And that a Amazing day of Life.
Hi Siakupega I really liked your writing because it has so much detail so good for that. I had did a writing like that on my blog but it was about my 5th birthday. Also remember to make sure that your I should be capitalise. Overall I really like you writing. Keep It Up
ReplyDeletethank you Oalii
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